Investor Suggestions

As a hypothetical investor of the film, we would suggest that the filmmakers flesh out the suspense/thriller scenes. Those scenes awkwardly stand out amidst the dramatic, melancholic tone permeating the rest of the script. It makes it difficult to target a niche audience, since the tone and format are inconsistent.

We would also implore him to choose a leading boy with an authentically expressive and emotive disposition. Caroline has many obvious emotional arcs, but Darrell's are much subtler. In the hands of the wrong actor, his performance could fall very flat.